sam_zhang 发表于 2007-12-13 21:18

please help me for grammer

Today I got up very early. because i have lessons very early in the morning. I've been sleepy all day today. when i was going to sleep, someone kock at the door. It is maintenance man. he comes in my room for defect furnitures . He change a neu refrigerator and bed for me. i am very glad about that. then the rest of time i see the film at the bed.

JingKang 发表于 2007-12-15 15:54

Today I had to get up very early in the morning to attend my lessons. I felt very sleepy the whole day.When I was about to go to bed, someone knockED at the door. It WAS someone for maintenance. He came in to check out my furnitures. He got me a neW fridge and bed.I was so happy about it and i spent my time watching movie in bed...

BTW, is this some writting excersices??:)
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