写了篇GRE的Issue，大家来批评批评

just something off the top of my head:
. open up sth pertinent to the statement in the topic, about property of laws/ morality is the supporting item
. avoid using "completely". this sets a sharp co ...
* I/ @5 i9 P7 h- c. ^3 DChris81 发表于 2009-9-13 23:09

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* w  ?0 g5 X7 ^4 x) u6 W2 _8 p. Ethx for your comments

flexibility 是要考虑circumstance  不就是要及时不断修改low吗？
结构我觉得也很清晰啊
morality我是想说不fair，太主观了

吃花生的大灰狼

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It has been widely recognized that laws could never be complete, even if they are amended frequently since future is not predictable.
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This is why institutions are essential.

For your reference:

It has been widely recognized that laws could never be complete, even if they are amended frequently since future is not predictable.

! c$ D$ @1 b6 `4 sThis is why institutions are essential.
8 o$ z9 U: e! A' h  B- u% o. d吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-13 23:54

! \$ Z4 f* o' h" R+ o0 L我没说laws complete了呀。

吃花生的大灰狼

我没说laws complete了呀。
! s; d% K6 J; v) O- {' \Anonymous 发表于 2009-9-14 00:01

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No.
( {9 q& K! M$ f( GIt's just for your reference since you mentioned the adaptability of the law to circumstances.

No.
! g2 U! X! `; `# pIt's just for your reference since you mentioned the adaptability of the law to circumstances.
吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-14 00:03

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thx

最后一次顶贴 看有没有人来拍

karlfriedrich

& v& K. Z% F' G% I. V2 ^when one of them is not functioning, we could still resort the other one.

1 n( h" r/ {& {- I8 G3 \" e$ MI would say: when one of them does not work/function, we could resort to the other (one).

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吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-13 20:53

agree with u
besides
But despite all that, we have to notice the circumstances are persistently altering, so do the minds of people
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for the above, I would like say
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agree with u
besides
But despite all that, we have to notice the circumstances are persistently altering, so do the minds of people
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# `7 d. i* D" u$ m8 k- e6 ?for the above, I would like say
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9 K: s: k, X  O! R1 z' n3 gkarlfriedrich 发表于 2009-9-15 23:35

karlfriedrich

suggestions for a writting in a examination.
1.structure is very very important. usually, a article is made up of 4 paragraphes. one of them is conclusion.the other three are supporting points.
4 q/ x! m! ^' ^- F2.examples or metaphor is a useful skill
2 c0 ?  |/ }2 v& S4 W: J7 n, C3.the american do not like the saying: a coin has two sides. for them, either true or false, either good or bad.
just suggestions for the examination.

suggestions for a writting in a examination.
1.structure is very very important. usually, a article is made up of 4 paragraphes. one of them is conclusion.the other three are supporting points.
2.e ...
7 y, D; C% M# T0 okarlfriedrich 发表于 2009-9-15 23:48

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