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吃花生的大灰狼

我是想表达，如果法律修改的太快，情况稍微一变就改。那么法律就无法执行了。执法者不熟悉法律，而平民也不熟悉法律，可能就无意中触犯了法律。
- p: S8 {0 f1 b: x% Q) `1 pAnonymous 发表于 2009-9-13 22:08

So, you'd better rephrase them.

prone to be 是揍字数用的
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Another example:

* b- O6 z+ Y  X+ `' f* gAnother system to rule the people is    moral system. It is a completely flexible system, in comparison with the legal system.
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" l7 Q' X7 E# R' Ethe legal system.这个the应该留下了吧  前文提到过了呀

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Once a rigid and fixed law comes into force, the society can immediately reach a consensus,
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" N# k0 k3 F" Z/ h* O# pIn principle, a law comes into force after a consensus has been reached.

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the legal system.这个the应该留下了吧  前文提到过了呀
7 Z" i0 t) }1 f( S' n* S# {) fAnonymous 发表于 2009-9-16 12:40

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+ p5 q; Y8 X: v* mNo. I feel you may have to use "the" in the first place.

I am just wondering why you did not forget to use "the" in the second place.

No. I feel you may have to use "the" in the first place.
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3 ?! o, ?/ v. x# O  S7 a4 XI am just wondering why you did not forget to use "the" in the second place.
吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-16 12:51

因为我的确不重视冠词的使用  用法也不一定清楚
冠词在我文章中都是爱写不写的
既然那人这么热心帮我指出来
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现在改成了，不知道对不对
Another system to rule the people is a moral system. It is a completely flexible system, in comparison with the legal system.

In case that the laws became so flexible that they were keen to perfectly adapt each emerging situation, then the problem should arise with executability. The laws could be so fast reactive to the changing situation that people violated the law without consciousness and executors judged cases with out-of-date regulations.
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这一段虚拟也改了   也不知道对不对

我重新开个贴 让大家来拍砖吧

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In case that the laws became so flexible that they were keen to perfectly adapt each emerging situation, then the problem should arise with executability. The laws could be so fast reactive to the cha ...
- @1 S# [- n$ Z) EAnonymous 发表于 2009-9-16 12:58

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I am uncomfortable with
"in case that..., then"
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"the problem ... with executability"
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* @# v5 d/ E7 m8 R$ g  }9 k& yOf course, I am not a native speaker.

Once a rigid and fixed law comes into force, the society can immediately reach a consensus,
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In principle, a law comes into force after a consensus has been reached.
& l' W, M, C: w0 w' m吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-16 12:49

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恩    但是法律通过不需要100%的投票率啊

( G$ n+ e! V; p$ ]2 |我是想表达  有了法律，你就算不满意 也要遵守。  不知道consensus换成什么比较好