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So, you'd better rephrase them.
3 V9 n& @: _/ N, z4 W吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-16 12:37

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那我在看看

I am uncomfortable with
4 g- t$ b2 [6 O& I8 ^8 z# f"in case that..., then"
"the laws became so flexible that they were keen to "
( y" X% R- l6 q! b% N* a) N"the problem ... with executability"
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Of course, I am not a native speaker.
* h: m5 a; Y2 ^/ \# R) p, R: h& u吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-16 13:05

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你是说就keen用的不好
& j! V2 X4 M, j还是"in case that..., then"
"the laws became so flexible that they were keen to "
" o! D+ U9 D5 T"the problem ... with executability"这3个都不好



keen我改成tend to了，你觉得怎么样

吃花生的大灰狼

因为我的确不重视冠词的使用  用法也不一定清楚
5 H% Y5 p7 }9 h* _冠词在我文章中都是爱写不写的
2 n5 e9 Z0 M1 e, L5 |( n既然那人这么热心帮我指出来
, }+ [3 \  |0 z7 K- N- i  B5 g5 {3 f我就改改吧
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现在改成了，不知道对不对
Another system  ...
' C* r  z3 P9 {* M' aAnonymous 发表于 2009-9-16 12:56

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I am not sure. If I were you, I would use "the" in place of "a".

吃花生的大灰狼

你是说就keen用的不好
还是"in case that..., then"
/ ^9 K( k$ @( U" S" H3 u"the laws became so flexible that they were keen to "
"the problem ... with executability"这3个都不好
2 W- K  j2 b' J6 ZAnonymous 发表于 2009-9-16 13:11

All those three points make me confused.

吃花生的大灰狼

By the way, I think it should be "adapt to sth"

By the way, I think it should be "adapt to sth"
# H+ I. q: Y9 m6 @$ y, g吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-16 13:17

+ m# e/ P9 _9 ^8 t$ V6 s改好了