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英语写作中级技巧:给参加与不参加我口语培训的朋友们的礼物(2)漂亮句型

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 楼主| 发表于 2009-10-7 08:08 | 显示全部楼层
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1) Snow White did her chores with a smile, often singing while she worked .% r* j* p0 y- j6 j: \0 x
注意与原句的比较:  Snow White did her chores with a smile. Often she would sing while she worked.
' ^' C0 C% N1 @只需要把sing 改成现在分词表状语就使写作上了另外一个层次,而且完全不影响原句意思和效果4 m) w# Z" c4 g7 E1 I
2)Like digestion, memory is one of those abilities that we take for granted except when it fails us.- {6 D, N2 C7 _3 S
3) Linda sat there, still wrapped in her beautiful coat around her against the cold.
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谢谢deutschlandcard的答题,做得非常好,写作时在请尽量(不要绝对哟!)将句子写成此类形式,而不要过份依赖从句。
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发表于 2009-10-8 12:36 | 显示全部楼层
What do you think about that I learn "The Adventures of Tom Sawyer"?
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