哥哥姐姐，你们可不可以帮我？

jack99

请帮我找出错误，谢谢你们！
Dear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show,but lam in the Computer Clab and we designed the programmes.
3 j7 P' Z6 `+ e3 O& PThe children practsed every day after school.
8 ^; k- P; t* w& w" t5 X9 @! ]: \Then,at Tuesday,5th May,the dress rehearsal stadet at 4o clock.
' b6 c2 J9 l! w3 NJo was one of the pirated.
  B4 |) z# t# r5 {% i. `' y& IThen on his left.
Jack was very good in the band.
9 Z) @; u$ S- wWe all listed to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
After the end of the rehesalwe were all very happy.
6 ~! s5 |8 c$ E. vWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you habe shows in your school in New York?
, n9 {3 n, m- a- _) NTell me about them.

& p, s* P- `0 vLove, Jack

jack99

哥哥姐姐们，我主要想看红色粗体的词用的对不对。

kiro

Dear Jay,
- J) a/ @2 [) U5 Q+ O& N' {7 W7 zThe rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
9 p$ N* |* ?7 f1 S6 T+ ZI was not at the show, but lam(?) in the Computer Clab(?) and we designed the programs.
The children practiced every day after school.
1 p& m6 s( Q# s- o1 [Then, on Tuesday,5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
Jo was one of the pirated(?).
2 d( M8 x; d: W6 K% _& X& }# nThen on his left.(?)
$ i  s1 M$ G) c) Z- n; tJack was very good in the band.
We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
+ ~# p1 W9 y/ `* w8 vAt the end of the rehesal, we were all very happy.
$ Q. ^- M% B6 G- h! g0 [3 l1 YWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
. N! _- `0 H0 ]5 uDo you have shows at your school in New York?
& O# {4 A# H- p% S4 \) a' a; cTell me about them.

Love, Jack

大脸MM

British English, I assume?
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Dear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
9 {$ S4 k/ W" J+ t2 d4 N8 HI am not on the show, but l am in the Computer Club and we designed the programmes.
, `* `( G& s/ {" P+ F6 S& AThe children practised every day after school.
( T; c& u. F/ q7 v5 ~7 T2 qThen, on Tuesday, 5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
Jo was one of the pirates.
Then on his left. (<-- ???)
Jack was very good in the band.
We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
# O' N1 Y8 ]0 x6 OAt the end of the rehearsal we were all very happy.
+ @* w! o1 f3 a1 V; P' E% ^We are ready for the show tomorrow.
# @; a6 a8 o5 q1 q# pDo you have shows in your school in New York?
Tell me about them.

Love, Jack

jack99

Danke!

itsfun

Sping Show or Spring Show?

jack99

Dear Jay,
8 |, u8 D' b  j. Y2 j2 `The rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
8 ?) [' h; M' P- S' QAll the children were very nervous.
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0 q! D! r' |& V8 s. xkiro 发表于 2010-5-7 22:29

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8 r5 o* w( @% F* \6 \    Vielen Dank!

jack99

British English, I assume?
: q& U/ M7 K% a0 N) ]0 b# P
Dear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
- u+ Y* V7 u+ HAll the  ...
大脸MM 发表于 2010-5-8 08:31

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    Vielen Dank!

jack99

Sping Show or Spring Show?
9 N; R1 ]8 T. E" v& V# \! ditsfun 发表于 2010-5-8 12:19

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6 z8 t* |& S+ _& d4 c    Spring Show
; y( Y; u" q; J& B! H- i) Y& g    Danke!