需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！

& n# G/ K4 q' x7 \1 Q( F0 m: vDaisy is getting up at 6.30h.
And she sees her cat first.
; ^# g* y# ?: N* i2 P' Z0 fShe goes to thestation by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
# ]; b5 q3 I1 Y* n( l9 }- aIn the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
$ P8 g) X* S4 y7 ^1 f: o3 ]She is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
And a friend waits for Daisy.
( T' x6 Z5 f4 p7 o( w2 Y! FAsk eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
4 x' O$ b0 p% A' ^, JAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

# @' }" D& i( K0 R+ o$ PDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
7 L% A. A* c+ }8 ]( M: P: Q" xShe sees her cat first.
  g3 T$ W1 _$ s$ O7 }- AThen, she goes to the station by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
: o# ^9 ~& l" l4 H2 LIn the train Daisy reads newspaper.
She arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
There a friend was waiting for her.
Ask eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
6 Y0 h7 r* h. I, x6 B$ s5 IThen ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
2 {7 N* ]% _6 h  `: oAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

最后几句也搞不清。试试。
The friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
1 T6 s1 o; O/ p" E2 `Then they went shopping.
5 V' u" L5 R, j- u) p5 BAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

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Ask eats in a china resteron.
: z+ b3 I! }# F7 [Then ask shopps.
. x4 C' Y6 S. K5 x! vAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
  Y0 ]; k, ^; B* B
最后几句也搞不清。 ...
9 p+ @8 D+ d4 s0 F# K' \  v1 \itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

) b5 g4 E) t* u" [" _5 s( }1 \    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She see ...
0 y' X0 |6 R. o  g- p, o$ o# W. Vfoxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

. e  i5 V7 {, ^- A. B7 Q5 [# S    Danke schoen!