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jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！
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Daisy is getting up at 6.30h.
  ~" @7 t3 K8 CAnd she sees her cat first.
She goes to thestation by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
# Q9 m/ n3 l$ |In the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
8 \5 ]: y* J4 B1 y$ xShe is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
. c5 b/ a  z  [! nAnd a friend waits for Daisy.
Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
0 d% t& R$ O' Z4 HAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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. c7 X$ }# P% ?- S- X  s3 EDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She sees her cat first.
Then, she goes to the station by car.
. P3 v* B& F: J1 `* ?At 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
4 A7 H- t& L9 Y8 P3 {" OIn the train Daisy reads newspaper.
She arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
4 n: k% Y# v$ C% z$ V8 ZThere a friend was waiting for her.
$ O9 @5 p( m- N5 fAsk eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
Then ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
* ^5 f" n1 S7 U% {& |At 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
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At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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最后几句也搞不清。试试。
The friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
Then they went shopping.
' }  r- M$ r2 B' h+ [+ AAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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最后几句也搞不清。 ...
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She see ...
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