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jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！
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Daisy is getting up at 6.30h.
- e1 K6 Y& n- @' |& H1 e3 `And she sees her cat first.
She goes to thestation by car.
" o/ [: x, f# z. j1 W: x  J0 lAt 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
6 c  B1 w+ K. h* O. W% F" cIn the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
She is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
$ k2 p( j. o9 Q/ a- d& dAnd a friend waits for Daisy.
Ask eats in a china resteron.
/ \7 ^, a; N1 b0 n1 C% b( xThen ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She sees her cat first.
Then, she goes to the station by car.
+ q1 H  g: @* v! o5 KAt 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
( g! K9 @3 P, x7 h9 SIn the train Daisy reads newspaper.
She arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
There a friend was waiting for her.
5 u8 I9 h0 v. b; Z. t. MAsk eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
Then ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
: E7 h" V7 G' ?# A& QAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
  G* }% w3 b' d- R1 w! e' |; M/ h: FAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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; u4 e' j# k. ?. H. c8 a2 x最后几句也搞不清。试试。
The friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
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At 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

Ask eats in a china resteron.
9 H. Q$ v" M0 @6 r. _8 S3 Y+ Y# ^Then ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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/ h: ^/ O6 I; B! b/ v% j3 n最后几句也搞不清。 ...
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She see ...
foxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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! I+ `: N5 G) k) ^* X    Danke schoen!