发一篇原创的英语文章，讲自己是英语的落跑新娘，被德语GG拐走了~~~~~

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原帖由 neuron 于 2008-7-26 16:13 发表
" t7 U" s1 K, r- d+ i$ Y+ F* w7 }: h5 EFriend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it-- with him (if you were the bride, and he was suppose to be bride. then please write him instead of it.)
much congratulation-->many c ...

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太赞了！！！谢谢neuron亲啊！！！ 大鞠躬一个$m15$ $m15$

莆萝菲

只看了第一段，提几点小建议：
. B. d' {( M' ~/ _! T. w  }Couple? I thought we would be—after all ,we had received so much congratulation—but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride”
couple 要改成 A couple， couple 是可数名词，单数形式要带冠词。同理，之前的"friend" 改成“friends”才好。
% Z6 `7 o, f- K3 H( M“we had received so much congratulation”这句不是很懂，lz想表达什么
) g0 _1 {1 `7 I: Z6 _( R“but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride””这句里的was应该用is 和am, 因为你现在是这个状态。
“we won’t be apart until we die ”until 改成unless更合适, apart 做副词应用为apart from each other, 如果lz一定想用形容词，用separated 更地道。否则你这句话的表达too chinese english ^_^

一梦二十年

I think I will really mad, if the basic knowledge of English are continuing flying away.
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应该是 go mad,   后面我会用  slipping away.