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lingling · 发表于 2009-8-6 16:09

LZ., good job!
I just doubt if sometimes you use more commas than necessary. For example, before OR and after BUT you do not need have a comma.

mayjiay28 · 发表于 2009-8-6 16:42

good to learn the different culture~ look forward to ur diary 2morrow

learnEnglish · 发表于 2009-8-8 00:30

LZ., good job! . E; `: U, }+ j+ }. }/ e7 k
I just doubt if sometimes you use more commas than necessary. For example, before OR and after BUT you do not need have a comma.
7 K( [7 U' d% o, F2 Plingling 发表于 2009-8-6 17:09

Thanks.I have just edited it.

learnEnglish · 发表于 2009-8-8 00:35

good to learn the different culture~ look forward to ur diary 2morrow
: H6 A# y) G' }! H# d1 |7 Y Kmayjiay28 发表于 2009-8-6 17:42

Thanks for your encouragement

牛奶咖啡 · 发表于 2009-8-8 00:42

Thanks for 小米and方格's help.. p$ a# j- ]3 R2 e+ ]- o |
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I meant that birthday man is important person for me.7 m( Q$ D5 G f8 D# L7 `0 P
Of course,my friend is more important than him.
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Thank 小米and方格 again.
! P3 x2 L) n; h* AlearnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-4 14:25

birthday boy 比较常说的。

牛奶咖啡 · 发表于 2009-8-8 00:44

17# learnEnglish

Do you ask me this problem because。。
人可以ask question 也可以cause problem..通常不ask problem, 除非 ask for problem..

牛奶咖啡 · 发表于 2009-8-8 00:59

21# learnEnglish

亲，有几条我就一起说啦
1. 关于 too tired but happy
这个汉语里的非常直接换用 too 不太合适，因为too有导出下文否定含义的功能。。
另外这句话和下句直接最好用连词，比如表原因的，串成一句。不然整篇都是简单句的罗列，会觉得单调。
2. 关于牛羊肉，那个宰杀的动词应该和有生命的名词搭配使用，已经成了肉就不用杀了。。
3. In other words, Muslims don't eat non-halal-meat, either.
这个句子很好，但是这个either 离前一个否定结构太远了，读者未必能跟上亲的思路。。
4. brought some halal-beef and halal-chicken for himself.
这句话里用 bring along sth. with sb. 比较好。。

learnEnglish · 发表于 2009-8-8 02:49

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Do you ask me this problem because。。
* B& j+ U0 R" K7 v# t7 F 人可以ask question 也可以cause problem..通常不ask problem, 除非 ask for problem..
: d: q2 i9 R. S0 r牛奶咖啡发表于 2009-8-8 01:44

Thank you very very much

(Did you ask me this question because you had seen I had written "I am using the pink phone"?)

learnEnglish · 发表于 2009-8-8 02:53

本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2009-8-8 04:44 编辑

21# learnEnglish
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* |" g- z; }0 b0 ^5 B( ~4 a亲，有几条我就一起说啦
# c5 Z# H' L, ]( s1. 关于 too tired but happy
& z4 T3 H2 M3 U) P这个汉语里的非常直接换用 too 不太合适，因为too有导出下文否定含义的功能。。
* B/ A1 [% H, f1 y/ Q! D( M另外这句话和下句直接最好用连词，比如表原因的，串 ...1 C% a# s$ @# O- C% P. b
牛奶咖啡发表于 2009-8-8 01:59

Thanks

I edited (1), thank 咖啡

(2)(3) don't know how to edit...
(4)I want to emphasize "for himself", not "for others"...

learnEnglish · 发表于 2009-8-8 03:15

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