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牛奶咖啡

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亲， 建议改成：
For example, we all know that Muslims don't eat pork,
2 W% t8 }% J  e! l; Xbut not all of us know that they don't eat non-halal-meat, either.
下面再解释什么是 non-halal-meat。。
而且前面用了 we， 后边改用 everyone 就不好看了。。
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关于宰杀： 保留这个动词就可以了， 把主语换成牛和羊即可。

牛奶咖啡

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6 h2 |3 k) \* j- Q" |1 d7 O# _Did you ask me this question because you had seen I had written "I am using the pink phone"?
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呵呵这样改就可以了，如果说还有要注意的， 就是在句子里连用两次过去完成是很少见的。最好分先后。
4 [; B" g+ J7 Y/ u! `这两个动作还是有先后的。所以：because you SAW that I had written about using a pink phone..

牛奶咖啡

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亲，个人同意Patton的建议。
beauty spot 让人首先想到的是化妆品和美容沙龙。

aerostar

"heed" better be replaced with "attention". "pay attention" is an usual phrase for what you want to express. I almost didn't know what "heed" means in usual English, or should I say, American.

牛奶咖啡

亲这个heed 用的不错！！
nobody paid any heed to 有一种nobody cared a shit 的轻蔑。。
这个语气表达得很好。。呵呵
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aerostar

呵呵，可能吧。美语里的确不常见。另外美语里也不说nobody cared a shit, 而是说nobody give a shit.

程普

New Concept is the worst book i have ever ever seen!

mayjiay28

learnt a new word...beauty spot..
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+ T" D/ f& S  m2 P% }$ Y剑桥高级学习词典：
beauty spot 1  
beauty spot (COUNTRYSIDE) noun [C]
a place in the countryside which is particularly attractive
beauty spot 2  
beauty spot (SKIN) noun [C]
a small dark mark on a woman's face that is considered to make her look more attractive
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朗文当代英语词典
beauty spot  
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n [C] BrE
a place in the countryside which is famous because it is very pretty
　Guests will be able to visit some of the local beauty spots.
a small dark mark on a woman's face - used when you think it is attractive
: m" @1 D) N/ i) hAmerican Equivalent: beauty mark

牛津高阶英语词典
beauty spot  
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" m7 D+ b3 ^+ S( ] (BrE) a place in the countryside famous for its beautiful scenery
: f, m2 I% [* } (AmE also beauty mark) a small dark spot on a woman's face, which used to be thought to make her more beautiful

VinniDoll

哈哈 偶家twin难得这么严谨治学一回 赞一下
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& v! G% E! `) MP.S. 原来美语里也有 美人痣 一说呀

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learnt a new word...beauty spot..
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剑桥高级学习词典：
beauty spot 1  
. v( d# W( }# l* }4 b$ m" l; Kbeauty spot (COUNTRYSIDE) noun [C]
a place in the countryside which is particularly attractive
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learnEnglish

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5 t0 ^1 g% m0 X$ ^+ S! B3 z亲， 建议改成：
For example, we all know that Muslims don't eat pork,
but not all of us know that they don't eat non-halal-meat, either.
下面再解释什么是 non-halal-meat。。
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have edited it. thank you so much