Anonymous 发表于 2009-9-13 23:24

just something off the top of my head:
. open up sth pertinent to the statement in the topic, about property of laws/ morality is the supporting item
. avoid using "completely". this sets a sharp co ...
Chris81 发表于 2009-9-13 23:09 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif

thx for your comments{:5_363:}

flexibility 是要考虑circumstance不就是要及时不断修改low吗?
结构我觉得也很清晰啊
morality我是想说不fair,太主观了{:5_381:}

吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-13 23:54

本帖最后由 吃花生的大灰狼 于 2009-9-13 23:57 编辑

For your reference:

It has been widely recognized that laws could never be complete, even if they are amended frequently since future is not predictable.

This is why institutions are essential.

Anonymous 发表于 2009-9-14 00:01

For your reference:

It has been widely recognized that laws could never be complete, even if they are amended frequently since future is not predictable.

This is why institutions are essential.
吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-13 23:54 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
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我没说laws complete了呀。

吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-14 00:03

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我没说laws complete了呀。
Anonymous 发表于 2009-9-14 00:01 http://dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif

No.
It's just for your reference since you mentioned the adaptability of the law to circumstances.{:5_360:}

Anonymous 发表于 2009-9-14 00:08



No.
It's just for your reference since you mentioned the adaptability of the law to circumstances.{:5_360:}
吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-14 00:03 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
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thx

Anonymous 发表于 2009-9-15 22:42

最后一次顶贴 看有没有人来拍

karlfriedrich 发表于 2009-9-15 23:35

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when one of them is not functioning, we could still resort the other one.

I would say: when one of them does not work/function, we could resort to the other (one).

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吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-13 20:53 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
agree with u
besides
But despite all that, we have to notice the circumstances are persistently altering, so do the minds of people

for the above, I would like say
but despite of that, we have to....

Anonymous 发表于 2009-9-15 23:47


agree with u
besides
But despite all that, we have to notice the circumstances are persistently altering, so do the minds of people

for the above, I would like say
but despite of that, we have ...
karlfriedrich 发表于 2009-9-15 23:35 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
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karlfriedrich 发表于 2009-9-15 23:48

suggestions for a writting in a examination.
1.structure is very very important. usually, a article is made up of 4 paragraphes. one of them is conclusion.the other three are supporting points.
2.examples or metaphor is a useful skill
3.the american do not like the saying: a coin has two sides. for them, either true or false, either good or bad.
just suggestions for the examination.{:5_319:}

Anonymous 发表于 2009-9-15 23:58

suggestions for a writting in a examination.
1.structure is very very important. usually, a article is made up of 4 paragraphes. one of them is conclusion.the other three are supporting points.
2.e ...
karlfriedrich 发表于 2009-9-15 23:48 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif

thx{:5_360:}
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