contactsymon 发表于 2009-10-7 09:08

答案公布:
1) Snow White did her chores with a smile, often singing while she worked .
注意与原句的比较:Snow White did her chores with a smile. Often she would sing while she worked.
只需要把sing 改成现在分词表状语就使写作上了另外一个层次,而且完全不影响原句意思和效果
2)Like digestion, memory is one of those abilities that we take for granted except when it fails us.
3) Linda sat there, still wrapped in her beautiful coat around her against the cold.

谢谢deutschlandcard的答题,做得非常好,写作时在请尽量(不要绝对哟!)将句子写成此类形式,而不要过份依赖从句。

learnEnglish 发表于 2009-10-8 13:36

What do you think about that I learn "The Adventures of Tom Sawyer"?
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