jack99 发表于 2010-5-7 21:44

哥哥姐姐，你们可不可以帮我？

本帖最后由 jack99 于 2010-5-7 22:11 编辑

请帮我找出错误，谢谢你们！
Dear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show,but lam in the Computer Clab and we designed the programmes.
The children practsed every day after school.
Then,at Tuesday,5th May,the dress rehearsal stadet at 4o clock.
Jo was one of the pirated.
Then on his left.
Jack was very good in the band.
We all listed to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
After the end of the rehesalwe were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you habe shows in your school in New York?
Tell me about them.

Love, Jack

jack99 发表于 2010-5-7 22:12

哥哥姐姐们，我主要想看红色粗体的词用的对不对。

kiro 发表于 2010-5-7 22:29

Dear Jay,
The rehearsal dressfor our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
I was not at the show, but lam(?) in the Computer Clab(?) and we designed the programs.
The children practiced every day after school.
Then, on Tuesday,5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
Jo was one of the pirated(?).
Then on his left.(?)
Jack was very good in the band.
We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehesal, we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you have shows at your school in New York?
Tell me about them.

Love, Jack

大脸MM 发表于 2010-5-8 08:31

British English, I assume?

Dear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show, but l am in the Computer Club and we designed the programmes.
The children practised every day after school.
Then, on Tuesday, 5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
Jo was one of the pirates.
Then on his left. (<-- ???)
Jack was very good in the band.
We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehearsal we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you have shows in your school in New York?
Tell me about them.

Love, Jack

jack99 发表于 2010-5-8 09:29

Danke!

itsfun 发表于 2010-5-8 12:19

Sping Show or Spring Show?

jack99 发表于 2010-5-11 20:20

Dear Jay,
The rehearsal dressfor our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
...
kiro 发表于 2010-5-7 22:29 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif


    Vielen Dank!

jack99 发表于 2010-5-11 20:20

British English, I assume?

Dear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the...
大脸MM 发表于 2010-5-8 08:31 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif


    Vielen Dank!

jack99 发表于 2010-5-11 20:21

Sping Show or Spring Show?
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-8 12:19 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif


    Spring Show
    Danke!
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