辛氏丑奴儿的2种英译
看到2种译法, 想和大家讨论一下, 哪种好:译法一
Young I was，and ignorant of the taste of care；
少年不识愁滋味，
Alone I loved to mount the stairs，
爱上层楼，
Alone I loved to mount the stairs，
爱上层楼，
And in new verses my imagined woes declare．
为赋新词强说愁。
Now I’ve learned all the bitterness of life’s care，
而今识尽愁滋味，
Never would I hint my despair，
欲说还休，
Never would I hint my despair，
欲说还休，
Murmuring instead：Ah autumn，how cool and fair．
却道天凉好个秋。
（调寄《丑奴儿》）
译法二
In my young days，
I had tasted only gladness，
But loved to mount the top floor，
But loved to mount the top floor，
To write a song pretending sadness，
And now I’ve tasted
Sorrow’s flavors，bitter and sour，
And can’t find a word，
And can’t find a word，
But merely say，
“What a golden autumn hour！”
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