lingling 发表于 2009-8-6 17:09

LZ., good job!
I just doubt if sometimes you use more commas than necessary. For example, before OR and after BUT you do not need have a comma.

mayjiay28 发表于 2009-8-6 17:42

good to learn the different culture~ look forward to ur diary 2morrow

learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-8 01:30

LZ., good job!
I just doubt if sometimes you use more commas than necessary. For example, before OR and after BUT you do not need have a comma.
lingling 发表于 2009-8-6 17:09 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Thanks.I have just edited it.{:5_359:}

learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-8 01:35

good to learn the different culture~ look forward to ur diary 2morrow
mayjiay28 发表于 2009-8-6 17:42 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif

Thanks for your encouragement{:5_359:}

牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 01:42

Thanks for 小米and方格's help.

I meant that birthday man is important person for me.
Of course,my friend is more important than him.

Thank 小米and方格 again.
learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-4 14:25 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
birthday boy 比较常说的。

牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 01:44

17# learnEnglish


Do you ask me this problem because。。
人可以ask question 也可以cause problem..通常不ask problem, 除非 ask for problem..

牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 01:59

21# learnEnglish

亲，有几条我就一起说啦
1. 关于 too tired but happy
这个汉语里的非常 直接换用 too 不太合适，因为too有导出下文否定含义的功能。。
另外这句话和下句直接最好用连词，比如表原因的，串成一句。不然整篇都是简单句的罗列，会觉得单调。
2. 关于牛羊肉，那个宰杀的动词应该和有生命的名词搭配使用，已经成了肉就不用杀了。。
3. In other words, Muslims don't eat non-halal-meat, either.
这个句子很好， 但是这个either 离前一个否定结构太远了， 读者未必能跟上亲的思路。。
4. brought some halal-beef and halal-chicken for himself.
这句话里用 bring along sth. with sb. 比较好。。

learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-8 03:49

17# learnEnglish


Do you ask me this problem because。。
人可以ask question 也可以cause problem..通常不ask problem, 除非 ask for problem..
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 01:44 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Thank you very very much{:5_391:}
(Did you ask me this question because you had seen I had written "I am using the pink phone"?)

learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-8 03:53

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21# learnEnglish

亲，有几条我就一起说啦
1. 关于 too tired but happy
这个汉语里的非常 直接换用 too 不太合适，因为too有导出下文否定含义的功能。。
另外这句话和下句直接最好用连词，比如表原因的，串 ...
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 01:59 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif

Thanks{:5_315:} {:5_315:} {:5_315:}

I edited (1), thank 咖啡{:5_341:}
(2)(3) don't know how to edit...
(4)I want to emphasize "for himself", not "for others"...

learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-8 04:15

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