29# learnEnglish
Did you ask me this question because you had seen I had written "I am using the pink phone"?
呵呵这样改就可以了，如果说还有要注意的， 就是在句子里连用两次过去完成是很少见的。 ...
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 10:12 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
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I am completely confused about "beauty spot" and "heed". {:5_382:}
Don't give a shit{:5_312:}
本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2009-8-9 19:47 编辑
"heed" better be replaced with "attention". "pay attention" is an usual phrase for what you want to express. I almost didn't know what "heed" means in usual English, or should I say, American.
aerostar 发表于 2009-8-8 15:01 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
This is what she said, I quote:"但是没有人理我".
Don't know how to describe “没人理"......{:5_371:}
亲这个heed 用的不错！！
nobody paid any heed to 有一种nobody cared a shit 的轻蔑。。
这个语气表达得很好。。呵呵
另外这个词的难度级也比attention 高多啦！{:5_394:}
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 17:03 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Thank you{:5_363:}
Actually, I didn't really know what it means before.
Thank you for your explanation.{:5_335:}
本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2010-3-18 04:46 编辑
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48# learnEnglish
亲，抱歉马上要出门，今天没时间多说。。
想先提一个小建议。。做个练习，看看是否能把日记里每两三句简单句重新组织一下，变成一句复杂写的句子。。
另外还有就是能不能每次改写时尝试用难度级高些的词汇替换简单的表述。。
比如洗衣服，to do laundry, to do the washing , 垃圾分类，garbage sorting,等等。。
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亲加油，每天坚持很不容易！！
uk is the worst country for garbage sorting...
48# learnEnglish
另外还有就是能不能每次改写时尝试用难度级高些的词汇替换简单的表述。。
# D6 ?0 u2 X' M4 W5 t比如洗衣服，to do laundry, to do the washing , 垃圾分类，garbage sorting,等等。。+ z/ V牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-9 21:36 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
have edited it.{:5_341:} {:5_341:} {:5_341:}
It's 0:50, Good night.{:5_359:}
uk is the worst country for garbage sorting...
mayjiay28 发表于 2009-8-9 22:17 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
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